I'll consider writing more when you consider joining a TS 🙂 .

On an unrelated note, I think this chron might be my longest post.

I was hoping the daemon would be a better judge than Bellerophon 😞 . Then, he could arrest the entire city for consorting with daemons when he returned. Sure, they didn't know he was possessed, but that is no excuse 😛 !

Yay, you joined my challenge! : __D And wowev, you progressed the plot quite a bit! I still want more though - did the giant pelican really eat all those boats? & how was Alaric's nephew involved? Mysterious~

I didn't make that decision. 😉

So, Chevodocus has been kidnapped and Bellerophon has been possessed. Will we get to see the daemon acting as judge of Cademia or will Bellerophon break free in time to prevent the daemon from doing something heinous (such as releasing Antenor or some such thing)?

I don't know if I can work it into the last chapter, but his reasoning is something along the lines of "Thoas works there, so it must have been him."

Spoiler

(He was wrong.)

Edit: Re-reading this a few years later, I'm not sure what I was going for here. Did I confuse Autonous with Thoas, or did I think it was amusing to have Bellerophon confuse them (and then never get around to clarifying that in the story)? Oh well.

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Nice to see you around again, Rogan 🙂 . I enjoyed reading this series and look forward to its continuation.

I might go back and comment on each of these at a later date, but, for the moment, I will put most of my comments here.

As I mentioned elsewhere, a very worthy continuation to Grapper's story. I loved the inclusion of Randy Pringle and Amelia Earhart, particularly Randy's fate.

Out of curiosity, how did you come to add these two anyway?

@ikaterei_bot, on 30 April 2014 - 10:34 PM, said in (🕜)Grapper's Return::

I want a chronicle starring the goatgoat!

Well, I'm not going to continue the goatgoat's story, which I guess makes it… abandoned??

The detailed fight scene wasn't very Grapper-esque, but I quite enjoyed it (especially the fire puns) ^_ __^

Now I'm really curious about what Myus has been up to!

Props for accuracy in the castle/tomb layout! : ****D

At the end of this chapter, I totally expected Naxos to challenge Grapper to a Pokémon battle.

I love all the Z-WOLF team fighting moves that they all know instinctually as though they've done them dozens of times before! (OR, have they done them before? Maybe this isn't the first time the goat god turned back time?)

I was assuming 6 because that's the number in the first group. If we assume 4, it becomes nearly a hundred.

You tell 'im, Grapper! 😞

@ikaterei_bot, on 26 April 2014 - 07:15 AM, said in (पचीसी)Grapper's Return::

I want a bagel now...

It's not the first time we've seen these bagels.

NOOOOOOOOOO! 😞 Cheating rubber duck wizard!

My only regret about this chapter is that I should have written "to start some sort of super-suited space squad" instead.

@breadworldmercy453_bot, on 21 April 2014 - 07:19 AM, said in (.22 Special)Grapper's Return::

Another chapter! : __D I was so worried!

There was no way the goat universe could constrain the awesomeness of Grapper.

1/10. 😞

@breadworldmercy453_bot, on 19 April 2014 - 05:05 PM, said in (VINGTage point)Grapper's Return::

I can hardly handle the suspense! Will they go to goat universe? Will they accomplish any of their goals? Will Semius ever be human again?
This chapter rocks ^_ __^

I think you meant "Will they go to the GOAL universe" and "Will they accomplish any of their GOATS".

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Edit: Also, I wonder if you meant to link ch 19 instead of ch 18?

Yup, fixed.