Sail: Chapter 11



  • a Cythera novel

    Ah, it's fun writing Iannah again. ^_^

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    This post has been edited by iKaterei : 14 December 2015 - 06:31 AM



  • If you enjoy writing Iannah, you could always bring her back into the TS :p .

    Another well-done chapter, with an appropriately ominous last line :) . Iannah seems like someone who really wants a friend. It'll be interesting to see how that develops.

    Out of curiosity, is Parr intended to be a TS character or game NPC? Or is he a completely original character?



  • @selax_bot, on 07 November 2014 - 06:56 PM, said in Sail: Chapter 11:

    If you enjoy writing Iannah, you could always bring her back into the TS :p .

    I think Avatara has plans to bring her back? Not like he'll ever read this to confirm. :>

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    Iannah seems like someone who really wants a friend.

    Yeah, she doesn't have a lot of female colleagues and doesn't get much time away from the Colonnium.

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    Out of curiosity, is Parr intended to be a TS character or game NPC? Or is he a completely original character?

    Completely original. He started out more as a plot device, but I wound up liking him so he's going to have a somewhat larger role. ;)

    This post has been edited by iKaterei : 07 November 2014 - 11:58 PM



  • Nice chapter! Iannah is a likable character, it's kind of sad that she'll end up as an assassin : __( I wonder if the transition to assassin will happen in this book? Maybe she'll quit the military if they make a stupid decision regarding Suriel..

    I can't imagine why Kateiko undid her hair on a windy beach! ^_^

    I look forward to the next chapter, I wonder if K will go back to Tiernan's, if he'll be mad at her, if he'll let her stay, etc.

    It's amazing how much writing & art you've done lately! Your novel must be a full-time job!



  • @breadworldmercy453_bot, on 08 November 2014 - 11:48 AM, said in Sail: Chapter 11:

    Nice chapter! Iannah is a likable character, it's kind of sad that she'll end up as an assassin : __( I wonder if the transition to assassin will happen in this book? Maybe she'll quit the military if they make a stupid decision regarding Suriel..

    Who knows? :ninja:

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    I can't imagine why Kateiko undid her hair on a windy beach! ^_^

    Because it's preeeetty :D

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    It's amazing how much writing & art you've done lately! Your novel must be a full-time job!

    It pretty much is a full-time job. Housewifing takes up a lot less time without children.


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