@453 said in Fading Ashes:
Really interesting and fun to read ^_^ I was expecting a chron making fun of Tiernan, but I am not disappointed! It feels really good to read a new chronicle again. Thanks for writing! I think Selax is understating this Pandora's powers - with her Box, one can do just about anything.
You’re welcome; I’m glad you enjoyed it. Actually, I wasn’t even thinking of Pandora’s Box (at least, not in terms of the computer program), but it makes the name work better. I finally settled on it after being unable to come up with anything better.
@troyen said in Fading Ashes:
Your writing style has definitely improved.
Thank you, that’s quite kind of you. (I'm sure I'll return to form with my next post or chron though.)
@troyen said in Fading Ashes:
I think that was a good choice, but for a different reason. A first-person Selax story sounds difficult to do because Selax is one of those characters that knows way more about what is going on than everybody else, so you'd lose the suspense and mystery. It's the same reason why the narrator for Sherlock Holmes wasn't Sherlock Holmes. This way we're left speculating and trying to piece together the clues because we're as in the dark as the protagonist is.
That’s a good point as well. Ironically, I’ve been re-listening to some of the Holmes audiobooks recently.
@troyen said in Fading Ashes:
453, I need your help speculating here. I understood the message that using Pandora's Box to cheat at games causes horrible things like zombies rising up to ruin your friends' lives, but my memory of older stories is hazy.
I was hoping that message wouldn’t be so obvious, but at least no one has picked up on the hidden analysis of the early Roman Republic.
@troyen said in Fading Ashes:
Have we met these mysterious cranky old characters before?
I don’t think so though they’ve been rattling around in my ideas bin for some years. Some of their characteristics were only developed recently. However, if they have appeared before, you might tell me what I named them 😛 .
@troyen said in Fading Ashes:
The bear seems like a tavern reference but maybe that's a coincidence (maybe he's actually a dwarf). Then we have tall elf lady who sounds like a high school friend of Selax's.
It actually occurred to me shortly before writing this story that I’d accidentally ended up with an elf, Selax, and a dwarf-like creature, so I tried to come up with a way to make the last one less LotR-like. I think it’s a hopeless case, and I probably should just go with a dwarf and pretend the reference was intentional.
@troyen said in Fading Ashes:
What do you think is happening here? They clearly have some history and are aware of Pandora and are also a billion years old (which has all kinds of deep psychological implications if they were conscious and active for that time). Why did Pandora want Katerei (I mean, besides the obvious)? And if those undead weren't hers, whose were they?
All of these could theoretically be answered in future chrons...
I will say though that Selax and his associates are all rather old and are some of the saner beings to have reached their ages.